In addition to this we also changed the image layout on the page, this is because we came to realise that there should be a main image on the page, and that it should be clear which image is the main image. So instead of having a big block of text in the middle as shown in the design, we chose to use this space for a main image with less text! This turned out to be a success as it resulted in the front cover becoming more professional.
We then had to decide what the main image was of and what text should go with it, from our format research we knew that a lot of magazines used text and strap lines that were specific to the school to advertise it, this would appeal to the parents! For this reason we used the upcoming event of trekco for the year 12's to show the schools extra curriculum trips, this is something that would attract the parents as they would see how the school are interested in the students fulfilling their time at the misbourne. To emphasise this and to make our front cover more effective we used a pull quote along with the main image because it comes directly for the students, this makes the article relatable and ensures the parents that it is something the students enjoy. The main image has a direct mode of address as the sixth former was looking directly at the camera, we did this purposely to engage the audience.
Furthermore the aspects we stuck with from our magazine template was the masthead with both horizontal and vertical text because it was something that we had constant positive feedback from. We also thought that the masthead was really engaging for the student and is something that defies convention of a typical school front cover.
The two images we used either side of the vertical text was the logo, which is the norms of a typical magazine as it is in the top left, and also a picture of the school in the top right to show the friendly environment of the school.
One key thing we wanted to ensure we kept the same when finally making the magazine was the target audience. We wanted to engage the students but also appeal to the parents. For the students making the magazine visually attractive was crucial because students aren't interested in reading the contents as they focus on what the front cover looks like. Then we had to make sure the cover attracted parents, we did this through ensuring the content of the text advertised the school, this is something we picked up from through our format research.
Overall I think bag the final product turned out to be a success and was something that was visually appealing. I think me and Ellis took into account the peer assessment and the changes we made were beneficial to the front cover. However there are some negative aspects of our final product which is how it doesn't look as professional as a typical school magazine, this may mean the parents aren't as appealed to it. Also I think that even though the layout of the masthead is successful, the font of the text doesn't carry on the engaging vibe you get from the masthead, to improve this we could have experimented more on in design and photoshop to make the text have a better appearance. Having said this the success of the magazine overrules the negative factors, I am happy with our final product although next time I think I could improve based on this first experience.

